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Post by Orochimaru on Jul 26, 2007 8:47:21 GMT -5
Copy the templete below and repaste it in this thread for the bijuu you want.
Character's name:(Your Character's Name)
Bijuu:(The Bijuu)
How was the Bijuu sealed in your character:?
Powers:(What gifts did you get blessed with?)
RP Sample:(At least two paragraphs)
JINCHUURIKI REGISTRATION TEMPLATE:
[b]Character's Name:[/b]
[b]Bijuu:[/b]
[b]Powers:[/b]
[b]How was the Bijuu sealed in your character?:[/b]
[b]RP Sample:[/b]
((This templete also applies for lesser demons))
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Post by proto on Jul 30, 2007 22:21:43 GMT -5
Character's Name: Gin
Bijuu: Hachibi no Hachimata [Eight-tailed Demon Snake]
Powers: With Tailed Forms: ~High Stamina for Jutsu~ ~Incredible Regenerative Properties~ ~Increased Strength and Speed~ ~Higher Amounts of Chakra~
Without Tailed Form: ~Poisonous Chakra~: Anyone touched by this chakra is immediately injected with numbing poison to the part of there body that had touched the chakra. ~Chakra Potency~: This ability allows Gin to create abilities out of pure chakra. ~Dark Chakra~: What could be considered a chakra nature this gives Gin a darkness nature affinity and allows him greater chakra control. ~Untailed Bijuu Form~: Gin's eyes become snake like and more slanted he also begins to exhibit and more preditorial nature, This also increase all of Gin's attributes but only by 2. (If you notice at times Naruto's eyes become more fox like but he does not go into a tailed state.)
How was the Bijuu sealed in your character?: During the Second great ninja war all sides wished to posses ultimate weapons and as such Jinchuuriki were created. Hachibi no Hachimata had been sealed hundred's of years earlier in a small rock labeled "Demon Snake" this rock was created specifically for the sealing the demon within. Even then the rock was considered something of a bad omen and people would avoid it as such, this however ceased when the Sandaime Mizukage decided that it was time for the Village Hidden In The Mist to finally have something to be proud of and as such he sealed the beast within his son of only 3 monthes old. The Mizukage was shocked when a dark and purely evil chakra began to pour from the child, such a display of power at such a young age despite the demons presence within the body was above even the Mizukage's expectations but still he could feel the boy would grow up into something deeply-disturbed and cold-hearted and as such the Kage left the boy almost as if he feared the boys progress, the kage walked away even as the display of power dispersed itself he continued to walk showing no signs of grief or mercy on his face. Gin however was meant to live and even the best within him knew this and so the beast let loose an amazingly high-pitched howl which was sent out as a beacon to others within the area to investigate the animals grief. By now the Mizukage had disappeared and know one was left to hear him but the beast continued this time imitating the sound of a wounded dog, and now there was a response a group of Sennin (Hermit) ninja discovered the boy. From then on the boy was given a headband of the most prominent ninja group of the community, he was given a Kusa headband.
RP Sample: Gin had just finished an extremely painful training session with his current sensai and had pushed himself to the point of exhaustion. "Sensai why is it that we train so hard." His sensai being someone well into there 50's responded with "The reason why is because every ninja has there own nindo and as such every ninja wishes to protect there nindo the only way to do so however is to train until they cannot move anymore. This regimen makes any ninja strong and thus allows them to protect there "Way Of The Ninja" and any and all who are important to them. Always remember this." With that his sensai disappeared apparently returning to camp. "This one is different from the others he does not posses the hatred of the others and yet he posses more ability then even the leader." With that Gin took a nap hoping to further his training when he awoke.
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Post by Orochimaru on Jul 30, 2007 22:24:22 GMT -5
you did it completly wrong. the stuff you put without tail form is just general abilities anyone with a demon (lesser or bijuu) has. And your without tails sounds more powerful then when you have tails.
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Post by proto on Jul 30, 2007 22:26:02 GMT -5
What did I do wrong besides the powers?
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Post by Orochimaru on Jul 30, 2007 22:33:22 GMT -5
The fact that to my knowledge you cant seal a bijuu in an inanimate object. And the fact that i hold the saidme and the youdame mizukage and lst time i checked Urahara (the third) never had a son nor does he know any demon sealing jutsu. And that he would not be shocked by sealing the 8 tailed demon if he knew what it did. Plus you haft to ask permission to mention a kage or someones charrie in your profile. Plus when they sealed the 9 tails there wasn't chakra leaking so i doubt it would happen for the 8 tails.
Also you need a better description of how he was sealed. And anyways you should have asked about the mizuakge thing considering your talking to THE mizukage. Oh and as a final note your sealing needs to be a minimum 2 paragraphs.
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Post by proto on Jul 30, 2007 22:39:29 GMT -5
Shukaku was stored within a tea kettle and I did not know that there was an acting Sandaime Mizukage, otherwise i would have asked permission before using him. Yes the sealing thing was more fabrication then actual truth, the chakra leaking was a way to playoff the potenty of Hachibi's power, since his chakra is as strong as the kyuubi but the kyuubi's dow not have a limit.
Now I will rewrite everything since now that I have reread my sealing it isen't exactly up to my current capabilities, however i am going to have to do this tommorow since i ahve a massive headache and am not in a current state of being to be straing at a computer screen.
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Post by Orochimaru on Jul 30, 2007 22:41:33 GMT -5
ok just make sure you ask about if a kage is useable or not.
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Post by wowposter on Nov 12, 2008 0:41:13 GMT -5
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